part 6 evaluation

Part 6
We attracted our audience by asking people who fit our target audience description what they thought of our idea and how they thought we could develop it further. I think that we have reached our target audience, as we have showed some people our title sequence and they have given positive feedback and said that they would love to watch the film. When planning our production, we took into consideration feedback that we had had from our brief and treatment. We also thought about what our target audience would have in their rooms so that we knew what we were going to put on our set. We thought carefully about the music that we were going to use, and made sure that it was appealing to our target audience. When we got some feedback, we were told that the typography of 'Graduation Day' should be the same typography as the typography used throughout the title sequence. We went back and changed the typography and we now agree that it looks more effective. We also originally had a voice-over in our title sequence, however, due to people feeding back to say that it was unclear, we removed it and just kept the song instead and we agreed that it sounded much better. Overall, we were told that the mise-en-scene was very successful, and the point of view shots were very effective. Many people said that when the photographs of the characters were shown from an over the shoulder shot, it worked very well and the editing was very successful in this part. Some of the footage wasn't as successful as the camera was jumpy. However, we managed to make it look better through editing. One piece of negative feedback that we got was that the transition from point of view shot to normal shot was not clear. The work could have been improved if we had had a clearer storyboard, and planned what we were going to film properly the first time.